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                                            The Vampire’s Slave

READ THE WRITER'S COMMENTS FIRST!!!!!! Also, don't take or I will come after you >_>



(Alys Knighton)

     The Carriage bumped along at an alarming rate as a girl sat the floor lost in her thoughts.  What was this man going to be like, who did he know the old sorcerer, why did this strange man with this huge nice carriage get all of the old sorcerer’s stuff, why was SHE considered to be stuff…..  She had some many questions…she guesses she would find out when she got to the place where this new man lived....he might just let her go….she could be free at last….she could not even remember her family and what it was like to walk with out a collar on her neck.....with these happy thoughts she drifted into a heavy slumber……

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(Armand d’Angouleme)

     The old sorcerer had died last night….he had felt it, so as soon as morning came he sent some of his servants to get all the old man’s things….now he could hear the Carriage coming up the lane….he had stuff to look through now….sigh…suddenly the door flew open and in walked one of his servants, (o.k.  I need to tell you that up till now all his servants are males…but, not cause he is gay…it just hurts to have females around…), the servant took a hasty bow and then said up to Armand, “We have a problem, sir”   “what is it?”  Armand asked.  “Well, the old Sorcerer had….a pet sir and we brought her with because…”  “Her?”  Armand demanded “Yes, Sir...I can get rid….”  “I want to see her...NOW!” yelled Armand.  How could the old man have had a female….and why?  With these questions swirling around his head, Armand had arrived at the carriage.  Armand sharply pulled the door open and his mouth fell open at what he saw.  There lying on the floor of the carriage was a beautiful girl, who looked almost like his past love….  The girl had brown hair that came down just to her chest.  Her chest was full, but a nice size, she had some curves, but the rag doll dress she was wearing didn’t really show her figure.  She was bare foot and her hands were a sturdy size and rather long.  Armand looked all over her and then he noticed the leather collar around the girl’s neck.  On the collar there was a ring where he could put a leash and next to the ring was a folded piece of paper with Armand’s name across it.  He lead over the girl, took the piece of paper, opened it, and begin to read……..
o.k....so this is a story for one of see03's amazing drawings on here, with a Vampire and his slave girl. See03 had a back story but, wasn't going to write out a full story for it so I asked if I could......

If you want to see see03's pic looks up "Vampire Slave" (cause I can't figure out how to get a link up to it >_>;)

If you have any ideas for the story I would LOVE to hear them, and if any one would like to edit the story for my mistakes I would LOVE that to, cause I am Dyslecix there for that kind of stuff is hard for me....

No mature stuff in this chapter, but there will be smut and cursing latter on....you have been warned.....

So any way please read, enjoy, fav, and comment....but BE NICE.....Thanks

.....and I had to make this under general fiction cause it would not let me put this under Romantic.....and sorry for the pic...thats all DA would let me put

The people belong to see03, the story belongs to me...mostly....
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009  Student Writer
I think that Armand would be nice with her.I would like to read that he decided for her to be his conversation. He is buying her a nice dress, teach her to be a lady......

[link] will you write(or someone who doing that for you) 2. chapter
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ShakespeareActress Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
I think the 2nd chapter is all ready up. If not I will upload more next week.
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009  Student Writer
there is a 5 chapters.can you tell me when will be 6. chapter
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ShakespeareActress Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
I'm not sure, but either today or sometime next week if all goes as planed.
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Student Writer
Ok. Btw i love this story.I am weak for vampire/romance(kind vampire/human) stories.
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ShakespeareActress Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
thanks! I really like those kinds of story. I hope that the story reads well. :)
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Student Writer
i am hopping for ch 6
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ShakespeareActress Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
It's up and going if you want to go read it! :)
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Edward2061901 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
oooo ur dyslexic me too its a curse i hate it, i really like this story
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ShakespeareActress Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009
Thanks. I know being dyslecix sucks! (and not in the good way)
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